(Answered) ENGL147N Week 7 Discussion: Revision Plan

Initial Post Instructions

Part 1: Research & Review
Read and review our required reading and lesson on revision, editing, and proofing, as well as past feedback from your instructor and peers.

Part 2: Application
Prior to beginning work on this reflection, refer to the feedback you have been given by your instructor and peers over the past weeks plus any additional experiences you have with the writing process covered in the course. Pay particular attention to the essay feedback provided in Weeks 2 and 4. Reflection is an important part of the writing process. Examine how the writing process has been going for you with your essay up to this point.

Then, explain the results of your paper review with your peers.

  1. Detail the 3 most significant issues found in your writing throughout the course, placing them in the order of importance (the basis for a revision plan of action). As you write, be specific in which areas you are referring to, such as the introduction, claim, counterargument, etc., and how it relates to your experience with the writing process.
  2. Research ways to correct the problem, in our textbook and lesson, library writing references, or external sources. Provide an example of at least one correction based on these resources.

Cite your sources in APA format.

Follow-Up Post Instructions
Respond to at least two peers or one peer and the instructor. Compare your peers’ results to your own and share resources for improvement. Did your instructor find similar issues? Which revision and editing approaches work best for you?


Throughout my writing journey I have happened to have the following areas of improvements in my writing in week 2 and week 4;

  1. Proofreading my work
  2. Varied word choice in sentence structure
  3. Improper citations and integration in reference

When I started writing my paper I realized that i had a variety of mistakes in my writing. The flow of the sentences was not clear. This despite re-reading the paper after writing before submitting it. There was spelling mistakes, invalid punctuation and poor sentence structure. Most of my mistakes was mainly on the counter-argument part. I realized this was serious when the mistakes are many thus discrediting my…Please click the icon below to purchase the full answer at only $5.